Post by niki on Dec 18, 2008 10:58:49 GMT -7
Hey, I'm just trying out this idea i got recently, it's based in England... I'm not sure why they are all there or how they got there (Max probably faced a plane again... Yikes), It's half in Max's point of view, half in Fang's point of view, and partly in my original characters point of view... dont worry, I'm not the sort of person who tries to put myself in the story to fulfill my own personal fantasies while anoying the hell out of whom ever is reading it, this character is only there to make the story work, he is not there for any romantic nonsense as i said. Max Fang Niki
please rate out of ten and give me your personal opinions, I'm open for constructive critism, just don't be too harsh. I know I'm not too good at spelling or Grammar so please don't target that in your critisms. I don't know if there will be any Faxness but there might be, depends on what feedback i get. God, look at me, rambling on like this, you're probably thinking I'll never get to the fanfic but I'm getting there, I'm getting there...
See, I told you I'd get there.
Chapter 1
We were happy and free again, how long it would last for i had no idea but hey, i wouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth if you know what i mean. Good fortune had been following us since we left for England for a second time. Angel even found a £20 note in a puddle outside a shop. We found a nature reserve with a small wood in it. it wasn't as dence as i would like it but oh well. We found a brilliant little clearing in the woods. There was a huge hole in the ground with a load of branches thrown in and a dead tree laying across it. Nudge went straight to building a little wigwam out of the dead branchs, Fang Set up first watch in one of the Oak trees, Total sented every tree in the visinity, Iggy and Gazzy went to find some berries and Angel found a rope attatched to one of the higher branches of a beach tree. A makeshift swing. I gave her a quick ride on it while we settled in. I smiled. Everything was good. Gazzy and Ig came back a little later with a bunch of Blackberries and Iggy lit a fire. we were all set for the night. Fang and I walked out of the reserve and made our way to the closest village shop, leaving Iggy on watch. We got some bread and meat from a local butchers, it was more expensive than we thought, so we ended up getting the cheapest slices of meat we could, but hey, once you've gone most of you're life not knowing where you're next meal was coming from, or even when it was coming, even the worst scraps of meat seem apitising.
Once we were happy with what we had we headed back to the clearing.
We got back from the shops and Ig started to cook the meat. It smelt amazing. I flew back into the branch I had been sat in before I pulled out my laptop from the shoulder bag and checked my blog. the views were still going up. It was amazing how many people were following our story. It still made me laugh how Max had been so dismissive of the idea at first. I skimmed through the most recent replies there were so many so i could only read some but one caught my eye.
[shadow=black,left,300]Hey Fang, I've been keeping up with you for a while. nice to know you're in my neck of the woods now. Be seeing you soon.
Anonomyous [/shadow]
I frowned. "Be seeing you soon"? was that a threat or a request or a simple stament. The message read "Anonomyous", which struch me as odd seeing as all the others had names. the hair on the back of my neck stood up and i instantly got the feeling that someone was watching us. Max noticed.
"What's the matter?" she asked, a small frown line marked her forehead.
I indicated for her to come read the screen. She was as spooked as I was. we ate on full alert and Iggy took first watch... well first listen. But Max and I couldn't sleep at all. Iggy kept tensing as though he heard something but he would shake his head and relax again.
It was a few days earlier that i saw a message on fang's blog that they were coming over to England. I had been here for two years by now and I was so happy. I had been waiting for this. If my suspisions were correct then... well, i didn't want to get my hopes up but I was almost completely sure I was right. I wrote my reply in such a happy state I was almost kicked out of the cyber cafe.
I pulled out my pocket computer and loaded up his blog, i was waiting to know he was actually in England before I would look for him. My heart raced when I saw the last log in date. earlier that day. Now i just had to track the internet location. He was close, this was brilliant. it wouldn't take long to find him now. He was in the nature reserve. i smiled, put my pocket computer to sleep and popped it into the pocket of my duster coat. before heading off toward the reserve.
please rate out of ten and give me your personal opinions, I'm open for constructive critism, just don't be too harsh. I know I'm not too good at spelling or Grammar so please don't target that in your critisms. I don't know if there will be any Faxness but there might be, depends on what feedback i get. God, look at me, rambling on like this, you're probably thinking I'll never get to the fanfic but I'm getting there, I'm getting there...
See, I told you I'd get there.
Chapter 1
We were happy and free again, how long it would last for i had no idea but hey, i wouldn't look a gift horse in the mouth if you know what i mean. Good fortune had been following us since we left for England for a second time. Angel even found a £20 note in a puddle outside a shop. We found a nature reserve with a small wood in it. it wasn't as dence as i would like it but oh well. We found a brilliant little clearing in the woods. There was a huge hole in the ground with a load of branches thrown in and a dead tree laying across it. Nudge went straight to building a little wigwam out of the dead branchs, Fang Set up first watch in one of the Oak trees, Total sented every tree in the visinity, Iggy and Gazzy went to find some berries and Angel found a rope attatched to one of the higher branches of a beach tree. A makeshift swing. I gave her a quick ride on it while we settled in. I smiled. Everything was good. Gazzy and Ig came back a little later with a bunch of Blackberries and Iggy lit a fire. we were all set for the night. Fang and I walked out of the reserve and made our way to the closest village shop, leaving Iggy on watch. We got some bread and meat from a local butchers, it was more expensive than we thought, so we ended up getting the cheapest slices of meat we could, but hey, once you've gone most of you're life not knowing where you're next meal was coming from, or even when it was coming, even the worst scraps of meat seem apitising.
Once we were happy with what we had we headed back to the clearing.
We got back from the shops and Ig started to cook the meat. It smelt amazing. I flew back into the branch I had been sat in before I pulled out my laptop from the shoulder bag and checked my blog. the views were still going up. It was amazing how many people were following our story. It still made me laugh how Max had been so dismissive of the idea at first. I skimmed through the most recent replies there were so many so i could only read some but one caught my eye.
[shadow=black,left,300]Hey Fang, I've been keeping up with you for a while. nice to know you're in my neck of the woods now. Be seeing you soon.
Anonomyous [/shadow]
I frowned. "Be seeing you soon"? was that a threat or a request or a simple stament. The message read "Anonomyous", which struch me as odd seeing as all the others had names. the hair on the back of my neck stood up and i instantly got the feeling that someone was watching us. Max noticed.
"What's the matter?" she asked, a small frown line marked her forehead.
I indicated for her to come read the screen. She was as spooked as I was. we ate on full alert and Iggy took first watch... well first listen. But Max and I couldn't sleep at all. Iggy kept tensing as though he heard something but he would shake his head and relax again.
It was a few days earlier that i saw a message on fang's blog that they were coming over to England. I had been here for two years by now and I was so happy. I had been waiting for this. If my suspisions were correct then... well, i didn't want to get my hopes up but I was almost completely sure I was right. I wrote my reply in such a happy state I was almost kicked out of the cyber cafe.
I pulled out my pocket computer and loaded up his blog, i was waiting to know he was actually in England before I would look for him. My heart raced when I saw the last log in date. earlier that day. Now i just had to track the internet location. He was close, this was brilliant. it wouldn't take long to find him now. He was in the nature reserve. i smiled, put my pocket computer to sleep and popped it into the pocket of my duster coat. before heading off toward the reserve.